When I have taught writing classes to kids and teens, I teach that the elements of a story are plot, character, setting, and style. Some stories are better than others in each of the categories, but each needs to be good enough in one area so that people ignor the faults of the other areas. I have read several Clair Poulson stories and it seems like he is actually pretty good at plot, but not that great in any of the other areas. His characters are likeable, but not very dimentional. His settings are fine, (and a little bit fun for me since many of his stories are set in my home state and all feature people from my religous faith.) But his style is...well..., it isn't that great. It is almost charmingly bad. Once you just accept the fact that he never really learned the the "show, don't tell," rule, or how to write natural sounding dialog, then his books are pretty entertaining. They are almost folksy and I will probably read more of them on days I am waiting for something else I have on hold. (272 p. 2019)
Sunday, June 30, 2024
Watch Your Back by Clair M. Poulson
Wednesday, June 26, 2024
Great Courses: How the Medici Shaped the Renaissance by William Landon
I have long been fascinated by the Medici family. On the one hand they were minor rulers. Florence in the 1500's only had about 40,000 residents. On the other hand, they made a big enough impact on the world that almost everyone in the Western world have heard of them. This series is a good introduction to the dynasty, but because of the other lecture series about Italy I have listened to this year, there wasn't much new information. I was interested to learn about Anna Maria Luisa, who was the last recognized leader of the family's dynasty, who willed all of the Medici property and art collection to the city of Florence. It is because of her that much of their collection has stayed intact, and delights visitors to Italy to this day. Landon focus's primarily on the family's political roles and impact. I would have liked to have heard more about their interactions with the prominent artists and scholars of their day. Still, Dr. Landon's presentation is well organized and interesting and I would recommended it to anyone interested in the topic. (2021, 12 1/2 hour lectures)
Tuesday, June 25, 2024
The Weight of Air by Kimberly Duffy
This story started out promising. I thought the relationships of Mabel and her father, Mabel and Jake, and Mabel with her mother were all interesting and authentic. They all had demons in their past that got in the way of healthy relationships but they were trying to work through them. About 3/4 of the way through I began to feel tired of the story. The pacing slowed down and the story devolved into one uncomfortable conversation after another. By the end I was pretty dissatisfied, and the final resolution didn't help any. Since finishing the book I tried to think of what it was that I didn't like, and I realized the book was a feminist wish-fulfillment fantasy. Mabel starts out very insecure and dependent on men. By the end she has all of New York admiring her beauty, she is physically stronger than any man, and her love interest decides she is so wonderful he will give up his own plans and stay in a lifestyle he doesn't really like so she can keep her career. Mabel, herself, never considers giving up any of her plans for him. With her it is "my way or the highway." I decided that I would have liked the story much better if they were both willing to sacrifice for each other. It was very one-sided and I felt that if it were a real relationship, the chance of them splitting up and getting divorced later was high. The author needs to go back and read the old story of "The Gift of the Magi" by O Henry. For a relationship to work, both members of the couple need to put the other first. (2023, 400 p.)
Sunday, June 23, 2024
Lost in Darkness by Michelle Griep
This was a fun riff on the Frankenstein story. I say "fun" but it is actually fairly dark. The surgeon character is evil, and the author describes the mental torment the brother goes through with a "stream of consciousness" kind of prose. Still, the romance is good, it is clean, and the portrayal of Mary Shelley is delightfully gothic. Actually, "delightfully gothic" is a good descriptor of the work as a whole. I picked this book in a rush when I was waiting for other books I have on hold to come available, but after listening to it I am looking forward to reading the next in the series which is based on the story of Dracula. (320 p. 2021)
Saturday, June 15, 2024
Twelve Caesars by Mary Beard
This book is published by Princeton University and is based on a series of lectures given by Dr. Beard. I think most people would find it dry, but being both an art aficionado and a classical history buff, I found it fascinating. The book is read by the author, and her enthusiasm for her subject is evident throughout. I had never thought deeply about the difficulty in actually identifying people in ancient art. Some of the faces we currently associate with Julius and Augustus, are from artworks that may not have any connection to those men at all. I was also interested in what political messages the different images might suggest and how most modern viewers will miss them because they are unfamiliar with history. It made me want to read Suetonius before I travel to Italy in the fall. I appreciated her chapter on the Emperor's wives which explored both how they are portrayed in art, and what influence they wielded in life. If you are a humanities nerd like me, you may enjoy this. If not, you might want to give it a pass. (2021, 392 p.)
The Eyes and the Impossible by Dave Eggers
This is the Newbery winner for this year, and oh, does it deserve it. The writing is fresh and vibrant and the story is original. Most of all, Johannes and the other animals in the park have wonderful voices. Johannes sounds "doggy," the Bison sound "bison-y" and the squirrel sounds "squirrel-y". What's more, the reader does a wonderful job performing all the different characters, capturing, especially, Johannes' exuberance for life. As soon as I read this book I wanted to order a copy for my grandkids. I really think it will take its place among other great animal classics like Charlotte's Web and The One and Only Ivan. (2023, 256 p.
)
Thursday, June 13, 2024
The House at the End of the Moor by Michelle Griep
After reading the heavy Olivetti book, I was ready for another escapist historical romance. This one fit the bill nicely. The plot is well crafted and the main characters have realistic flaws they need to overcome. I have decided that the historical romances I like most are the ones where the couple have to overcome outside forces that are pulling them apart, instead of those where they are plagued with miscommunication and misunderstanding. This is an example of the good ones, and I found the mystery element, and the obsessed whacko jailor character to be interesting. The reader should beware that this author puts more overtly Christian passages in the book. They sound very "born again" and I am not sure their attitude toward religion is very historically correct. Actually, there were several parts of the story that didn't sound very historically accurate, but they didn't bother me. I don't read these novels to learn about history. I read them as a means of entertainment and escape. (320 p. 2020)






